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one day when the glass cracks under out feet it will send us shattering into a beautiful world of molten sand and transparent oceans, where we can forget how the sun forgot to shine and how we were the only light we saw, and where we can learn the word I and yet disappear in the vivid world without a trace other than the ripples in transparent oceans and footsteps in burning sand.
lawl. from a while ago.
if it makes no sense, too bad.
i have no clue either.
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xodus53's avatar
It does to you and that's all that matters?

I'm not sure why you're showing it to others, then.

I'm not trying to be mean though, I've totally done the same thing, so it's understandable. I've got some really unintelligible older stuff in my gallery too, but once you start to get out of that, and actually make the focus communicating the message, and not so much about writing pretty, things are much easier, and much prettier.

You won't even have to use fancy words to make a beautiful poem, the message lends itself so well.